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Boy, I came back to the Tavern on the right day! I've been away for a while, and for some reason my browser is no longer remembering my "last visit" information. (Yes, I cleared my cache/cookies/everything once, but new Tavern info is not being saved and/or remembered, despite cookies still being enabled.) So I might easily have missed this request/announcement. The readme is good. Substituting "like" or "wish" for either the first or second instance of "see fit" in the first sentence will eliminate the repetition, to help it scan better. Near the end, eliminate the second "yet" in "we have yet to reach that point yet". I suppose you weren't necessarily asking for copy editing. But that's all I have to offer. Comparing files... You've been busy. 134 values changed in btb.bin while I was away! Glad to see that you're making full use of the editor. BV |
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